Brian Haley:

1) Section 3.2

   cookie

      A cookie is a random number used by a mobile nodes to...

mobile nodes -> mobile node

2) Section 6.1.7 and 6.1.8

"If no options are present in this message, 4 octets of padding is necessary and the Header Len field will be set to 1."

is -> are

3) Section 6.1.7, three in this paragraph:

"Correspondent nodes SHOULD NOT expire the Binding Cache entry before
the lifetime expires, if any application hosted by the correspondent
node is still likely to require communication with the mobile node. A
Binding Cache entry that is deallocated prematurely might cause
subsequent packets to be dropped from the mobile node, if they contain
the Home Address destination option. This situation is recoverable,
since an Binding Error message is sent to the mobile node (see Binding
Error Message); however, it causes unnecessary delay in the
communications."

NOT expire -> NOT delete ?

deallocated -> de-allocated

since an Binding Error -> since a Binding Error

4) Section 9.5.1

"For packets carrying Binding Updates that fail to satisfy all of
these tests for any reason other than insufficiency of the Sequence
Number, registration type change, or expired nonce index values, they
MUST be silently discarded."

Change to "Packets carrying... values, MUST be silently discarded."

5) Section 10.4.6

"The return routability procedure described in Section 5.2.5 assumes
that the confidentiality of the Home Test Init and Home Test messages
is protected as they are tunneled between the home agent to the mobile
node."

home agent to the -> home agent and the

6) Section 11.3.1

"Likewise, if the mobile node uses any address other than any of its
home addresses as the source of a packet sent while away from home no
special Mobile IPv6 processing is required."

other than any of -> other than one of ?

7) Section 11.6.1

"It may even be completed without any messages at all, if the mobile
node has a recent home keygen token and and has previously visited the
same care-of address so that it also has a recent care-of keygen
token."

and and -> and

8) Section 15.4.3

"With these limitation, attackers cannot take practical advantages of this vulnerability."

With these limitation -> With this limitation 

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Jari Arkko: thanks.